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I have planned an autumn outing for my class next week，and I'm writing to ask your permission．
First，the place where we've decided to visit-the Forest Park is not far away from the city．We can take a bus and ride a bike to get there．Second，the trip would provide us with a great opportunity to get close to the nature．Third，we need to spare some time to take some physical exercises．Some teachers as well as Mr Wang is going to join us to make sure of our safe．
We are all looking forward to receive your permission．We will appreciate you if you can kindly give us an
immediate reply．

3．Hisphysical（  身体的 ） condition is not satisfactory．

2．All his dreams have come intorealities（现实）．

1．He lay beneath hispillow（ 枕头 ） and soon fell asleep．

20．As soon as I saw the cat in our yard，I knew he was a stray （流浪儿）．He looked  （41）C-a wounded warrior with a badly scarred body．
　　I started putting out food for him each day，but he wouldn't come near me if other people were  （42）A．Winter came，and he still wouldn't  （43）D  us．Then，one day，a car hit him so we took him to the vet's．
　　After a week，we were eager to bring him home to （44）Bour family．But when we went to take the cat home，the vet told us we should put him to  （45）D  immediately because the cat was so fierce and mean that he would （46）B become tame，let alone a pet．
　　But I have always had （47）Cin love's power to （48）Deven the wildest beasts．I told the vet，"I want to take him home．"We （49）Ahim Paws．
　　Three days went by，and we only knew Paws was  （50）C  the bed because when we walked past it we heard deep growling．
　　I wanted to somehow let him know he was （51）Dand loved．So I put on a hard hat and a pair of welding gloves．I （52）Bunder the bed toward Paws，with my face to the （53）Cand only the top of my head facing him．I   （54）D  out to stroke （抚摩） him gently over and over again．
　　He growled and tried to （55）Band bite me．It was scary-but I knew he couldn't （56）Ame，so I just kept going．Slowly，he began to（57）D．Then I slid out from under the bed and left the room．
　　Several hours later，I noticed a cat on the bed．It was Paws-all  （58）C  on the pillows!I couldn't believe it．
　　That dear cat became the  （59）B  of our household．Although Paws finally died of cancer，his legacy（遗赠）--my  （60）D  and firm belief in the power of love--lives on．

41．A．cute	B．strong	C．fierce	D．smart
42．A．around	B．in	C．out	D．away
43．A．love	B．attack	C．refuse	D．trust
44．A．please	B．join	C．see	D．satisfy
45．A．death	B．sight	C．observation	D．sleep
46．A．simply	B．hardly	C．easily	D．gradually
47．A．sense	B．interest	C．faith	D．feeling
48．A．comfort	B．convince	C．protect	D．tame
49．A．named	B．appointed	C．accepte	D．made
50．A．on	B．beside	C．under	D．inside
51．A．hopeful	B．pitiful	C．careful	D．safe
52．A．hid	B．slid	C．sheltered	D．slept
53．A．bed	B．sky	C．floor	D．feet
54．A．turned	B．picked	C．pulled	D．reached
55．A．play	B．scratch	C．lick	D．push
56．A．hurt	B．bother	C．avoid	D．betray
57．A．get angry	B．give up	C．run away	D．calm down
58．A．stepped out	B．stood out	C．stretched out	D．stuck out
59．A．hope	B．love	C．support	D．comfort
60．A．normal	B．noble	C．strange	D．continued

19．You may have heard of the book Moby Dick（《白鲸记》），written by the American author Herman Melville．You may also know that Moby Dick is considered one of the greatest novels ever written．However，it might surprise you to find out Herman Melville was not always a highly regarded author．
Melville's first two novels，Typee and Omoo，were widely read and financially successfully．They were both exciting tales of adventures at sea and experiences with people in foreign lands．Melville became quite famous．However，upon the publication of his third book，Mardi，Melville's popularity began to weaken．He was no longer interested in telling tales of pure adventure，and his writing took on a style that alienated（使疏远） the general reading public of his time．
Melville published Moby Dick in October of 1851．it was an original novel，combining aspects of sociology and philosophy，which confused readers by its complex symbolism．The book sold poorly．
Melville's next book，Pierre，was almost completely disregarded by the public．Debt frustration and ill health finally forced Melville to take a low-paying job as a customs inspector．Eventually，Melville abandoned prose（散文） and began to write poetry．
The Civil War is the main subject of Melville's poetry．He and his brother made a trip to the front line，and he published a book of poems，Battle-Pieces and Aspects of War，based on this experience．
Melville died in 1891at the age of 72．at this point，his work had been completely forgotten by the public．His talent was to go unrecognized for the next thirty years．Then，in 1920s，his reputation began to improve as critics and readers rediscovered his work．Today Moby Dick is one of the best-known novels ever penned by an American author．

24．What were Melville's first two novels mainly about？D
A．His travel experience．B．His successful communication skills．
C．Adventurous experiences in the front line．
D．Adventurous voyages and foreign experiences．
25．We can learn from the text that Moby DickA．
A．sold a little better than Pierre．B．was Melville's favorite novel．
C．was copied from other books．D．made Melville popular again．
26．The text may be taken fromB．
A．a writing guide                          B．a literary journal．
C．a science magazine．D．a critical book on literature．
27．What is the text mainly about？C
A．The main works of Melville．B．The skills in Melville's writing．
C．The ups and downs of Melville．D．The reason for Melville's failure．

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21．What is Geneva Tourist Guide？A
A．An app B．A bookC．A map D．An advertisement
22．Geneva Tourist Guide provides tourists with all the following help exceptD．
A．to discover what's on and places to visit in Geneva
B．to guide tourists to top attractions and shopping malls
C．to offer latest information o attractions in Geneva
D．to help tourists make friends with Geneva locals
23．Which of the following is not among highlights of Geneva Tourist Guide？B
A．Information about both expensive and cheap hotels in Geneva
B．Chances to visit Geneva galleries without paying any money
C．A search system that can find everything at Geneva
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17．Ten-year-old Cara Turner loves the giant saltwater pond on her grandparent's farm．When her grandfather Tom Turner bought the land 15 years earlier，he stocked the pond with fishes．（41）A  in winter，Tom  （42）D  regularly visit the 5.5-acre pond to feed the fishes．One afternoon，（43）C  the sun melted toward the horizon，Tom （44Bto head home from the pond．（45）D，he was unable to put one foot in front of the other and then  （46）A  backward into the ponds deep water．When he didn't surface immediately，Cara jumped in．It was too deep to touch the  （47）A．With one hand，Cara grabbed the bank．With the other，she  （48）C  for her grandfather．
Tom had （49）Da stroke（中风）the year before．Now Cara wondered if he had  （50）B  again．She grabbed her grandfather's head，pulled his face out of the water and then pulled him up onto the solid ground．The winter sun almost disappeared，and they were both shaking from the （51）A．Cara knew she would have to get Tom to （52）Cfirst，a quarter mile away．But sixty feet from the car，Tom fell．From there，he crawled （爬），（53）D  himself under a gate，to the car．Caro helped him into the passengers'side and then got into the driver's seat．"I used to sit on my dad's lap and watch him  （54）A，"said Cara．Although she felt （55）B，she pushed （56）Bhe gas and drove toward the nearest hospital where her grandmother Esca was to meet （57）A．
Tom spent six days （58）Ain the hospital from a stroke．Since the accident，he has （59）D  going to the pond alone．"If Cara hadn't helped，she might not have a grandpa （60）B，"said Esca．

41．A．Even	B．Still	C．Thus	D．But
42．A．should	B．could	C．might	D．would
43．A．because	B．though	C．as	D．since
44．A．turned over	B．turned back	C．turned up	D．turned out
45．A．Once in a while	B．As a result	C．By all means	D．All of a sudden
46．A．fell	B．jumped	C．rolled	D．dived
47．A．bottom	B．bank	C．water	D．pond
48．A．waited	B．cared	C．reached	D．looked
49．A．felt	B．seen	C．stood	D．suffered
50．A．that	B．one	C．everything	D．something
51．A．coldness	B．tiredness	C．anxiety	D．hunger
52．A．the farm	B．the gate	C．the car	D．the house
53．A．devoting	B．rushing	C．carrying	D．dragging
54．A．drive	B．sing	C．dance	D．play
55．A．relaxed	B．nervous	C．satisfied	D．embarrassed
56．A．in	B．on	C．away	D．off
57．A．them	B．her	C．him	D．they
58．A．recovering	B．treating	C．struggling	D．experiencing
59．A．continued	B．agreed	C．managed	D．stopped
60．A．after all	B．any more	C．at least	D．any better

16．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Getting rid of the bad habit of procrastination （拖延症）is now my goal in life．My first step was to set small targets what can be reached realistically．For example，I plan to set a timetable for my study．So after school，I will put finishing homework in the last place．Additionally，I will make a list of my important task including their due dates but follow my schedule strictly．I will avoid find excuses for putting them off．At same time，I will ask for my friends and parents to help me．By achieving this small targets，I have confident that I will overcome procrastination．

15．My doorbell rings at 11 am．On the step，I find an elderly Chinese lady holding the hand of a little boy．In her other hand （61）is（be） a paper bag．She is the little boy's grandmother，and her daughter，Nicole，bought （62）thehouse next door last October．Nicole has（63）obviously（obvious） told her mother that I am having a heart operation shortly，and the result is that her mother has decided （64）to supply（supply） me with meals．
I know what is inside the paper bag-a bottle of hot soup and a （65）container（ contain） with a meal of rice，vegetables and meat．It's become a daily occurrence．
Communication （66）betweenus is somewhat difficult because she doesn't speak English and all I can say in Chinese is hello．Once，she brought an iPad as well as the food．She pointed to the screen，（67）whichshowed at message from her daughter telling me that her mother wanted to know （68）if/whetherthe food was all right for me．
So here we are，two grandmothers，neither of （69）us（we） able to speak the other's language but communicating one way or another （ with some help from technology）．The doorbell keeps （70）ringing（ring） and there is the familiar brown paper bag，handed smilingly to me．