假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文章中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。 错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加： 在缺词出加一个漏字符号(^)。并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除： 把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1， 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2， 只允许修改10 处， 多者 （从第11 处起）不计分。
All parents wish their children, especially junior high students, can go to top university and have a  bright  future. So they always expects their children to make fully use of their time to study . They don’t allow them watching TV ,play the computer games or go out to play with their friends . Some students just complained that their parents are only concerned about their grades and not their other needs.
In my opinion ,how our parents are doing is out of nothing but love. The most important thing , I think, is that they should learn to communicate with our parents, tell them that we’ll never let them down and will work harder  earn trust and respect from them.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文　中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Lucy,
Thanks for your letter. I’d like to telling you about my first surfing online
experience.
This summer vacation when the computer was connected with the Internet,
my parents and I sat in the front of the monitor together. My father asked me
download some stock software, which could enable him to buy and sell shares
online without going outside. My mother loved Korean soap operas, so I
downloaded some for her but also told her how she could watch them online. At the
end, I searched for some English study website to help improve my listening and
speaking English. The Internet has allowed him family to enjoy a more convenient,
relaxed and efficient life.
How about your Internet experiences? I look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li hua

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线 （\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
　　注意：
　　1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只充许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was in high school , I had an awful experience . At that time I was so
brave and outgoing as the others. Because of that, a boy name Big Tom would do all
kinds of bad things to me . I was scaring to see him.
So yesterday, a friend told me that Big Tom wanted to see me and invited me to
dine out . I agreed. We met in a bar and I was so happy that nothing went well.
By the end of that night, Big Tom apologized for what he has done to me . Now we
have become close friends.
In our life, everyone may make mistakes. What counts most are that we have the
courage to correct them.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）。并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2． 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
I am a boy in the first grades of a senior high school． I feel uneasily recently． At home I feel
like prisoner． I am not allowed to watch TV or surf the Internet． The only thing I have to do it is studying．Every time I got a low mark，my parents will blame me sharply． There’s a generation gap among my parents and me, but it’s always difficult to communicate．Life are supposed to be colorful and wonderful, isn’t it? How should I devote all my time and energy to the study so as to entering a good university? I am very unhappy and lost． I need your help．
Best wishes，
Li Ping

文中有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:  1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping, members of “Green Eyes”, was having an environmental protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground. They picked it out and found it wounded. Think it might die without timely help, they took it to home. They made a nest for it but fed it on rice and water. The lucky bird recovered soon. When it was time for the bird to fly away, they felt pity but were very delightful. I think it’s worthwhile for him to do such a thing. Here I call on the public to show respects for nature. Only by changing the way which we treat the environment can we get along well with it.

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I went to see film after supper. On my way to the cinema, I met an old Englishwoman,
she had lost her way. I gave up the chance to see the film, walking towards her and
took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her great change had been taken place in the past few years and she told me something about Britain and her family. Though I missed the film, however I felt very happy, for I not only helped the old lady out from trouble but also practise my spoken English. If I hadn’t worked hard at English, I would have been able to help her

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线/ 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Jim is one of my closely friends. Two months ago，his mother bought a computer
to him as a birthday present. She hoped Jim will study hard with the help of the
computer. To his surprise，Jim just wasted plenty of time play computer games every
day. Now she regrets buying the computer. As matter of fact，a computer can do a lot of
everyday jobs for us. It is wide used in factories，hospitals，banks and so on. Many
computers scientists are now trying to make the computer to “think” like a man. In my
opinion，the key is what we should use it wisely.

下面短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
As the high school student, I like to talk with foreigners to practise my oral English and learn more about other cultures. There were two foreign teachers in our school in this term. They often go to the English corner so that they can have a chance to practise the language. I seize every chance talk with them. However, I sometime find they are not so interested in which I say. And it's hard to me to choose a suitable topic. I would like some advices about how to communicate proper with foreigners and what topics to pick.

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及—个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加—个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不记分。
Dear Katherine,
How exciting I am to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Fortunately, I won’t be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won’t find difficult to get to the city center. The bus left the airport every 30 minute and will take you right to the International Hotel. My class will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you to a hot-pot restaurant for dinner and we’ll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you on Friday.
Sincerely yours,
Zhang Lin

Did you enjoy yourself yesterday? I suppose you do. But I’d like to tell you what a bad day I had yesterday. Nothing just went wrong. On the morning, my alarm clock didn’t ring, since I woke up an hour late. I was in such a hurry that I burnt my hand when I was cooking the breakfast. Then I ran out of the house to catch the 8:30 buses. This is the bus I usually take. But, you may laugh, I missed it of course. I am very unhappy, and scared as well because teacher hates the students coming late to school.    So I ran three mile to school only to discover that nobody was there. The school was quiet but peaceful. Our classroom was locked. I realized that moment: It was Sunday.