9. How→What　10. from 后加 being　

No. 2

Gabriella works at a university as a adviser. Students can come or see her with many a problem when they need help. A lot of the students are worrying about their studies and exams. Some want to help with the problem connected with renting flats. The biggest problem, although, is loneliness. Colleges are exciting places but students find it hardly to make friends. They miss their family and feel lost on the new environment. They were upset. Gabriella’s job is to listen and try to understand what they are anxious. But of course she also gives practical advice when it is needed on their questions.　　

5. serious→ seriously　 6. this was→it　7.cause →caused　8. pretend→pretending　

1. was happened去掉was　2. when→while　3. stayed in去in　4.roll→rolling　

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不记分。

No. 1

A shocking incident was happened in Beijing Zoo. I was visiting the zoo while I heard bears roaring terribly. I hurried to where bears stayed in. I saw the black bears injured and roll on the ground painfully. One of them was hurt too serious to move and feed. The people around were astonished. I learned this was a student from a famous university who cause the trouble. He poured sulphuric acid (硫酸) onto the bears while pretend to feed them. How a shame! Animals are our friends. Something must be done to prevent them from injured.　　

6. have its→has　　 7. to do去掉to　 8. eye→eyes　　 9. And→But　 10. as→like

高考英语短文改错课堂练4

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

1. remind→reminding　 2. which→that　 3. read→reading　 4. takes后加up　 5. what→how　

6. 去掉again　 7. paper one→ones　 8. either→also　 9. Beside→Besides　 10. late→later

No. 6

First, I’d like to thank you for your remind, although I don’t agree with your view which students should spend more time on their lessons instead of read novels. Indeed, reading novels takes some of the time that should be spent on lessons, but it’ll make us know what hard life is. Besides, by reading novels we can gain what we can’t learn from our textbooks. Of course, reading novels have its shortcomings. Novels that have wrong idea will make us to do something wrong. Maybe, in your eye, the disadvantages of reading novels outweigh the advantages. And my opinion, reading novels is just as another pair of eyes, which broadens my horizon.

1. come→comes　 　　　 2. have any→be　 3. leaving→left　 4. make前加to　 5. fewer→less　

7. more better去掉more　 8. I was→am　 9. cost→spend　 10. observe 前加to

No. 5

Now paper still come from trees. Unfortunately, we use a lot of paper every day. We mustn’t waste paper, or there will not have any trees leaving on the earth. No trees means no paper. We need 17 trees make one ton of paper. We must start using fewer paper. How can we save paper? Firstly, we can use both sides of paper. We can reuse again envelopes. We can use plastic cups and plates instead of paper one. We can either use handkerchiefs instead of paper tissues. Beside, we can use fewer paper shopping bags and we can reuse these paper bags late.

1. That→It　 2. such→so　 3. spend→spent　 4. on→in　 5. them→it　 6. wish→wishes