Question

2．请根据下面的提示写一篇英语短文．要求语句通顺，语法正确．省略号处需要补充．
80词左右．
1．班上有些同学感到学习压力大，以至过分紧张；
2．症状：夜晚休息不好，课上精力不能集中，…
3．你认为产生压力的主要原因：第一、课多，作业多．第二、…
4．解决这个问题的办法：我们应该自信、放松，仔细计划时间，…

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
it takes them five or six hours to finish the homework．他们花了五个或六个小时完成作业．  it takes some time to do sth．做某事花费…时间．
  高分句型二
 we should plan our time carefully so that we can have more time to rest．我们应该仔细计划时间以便我们有更多的时间休息．so that  为了，以便于，引导结果状语从句．

解答 Some students are stressed out because of the learning pressure，【要点一，班上有些同学感到学习压力大，以至过分紧张】they can't sleep well at night and can't concentrate on their lessons．Some of them even have a headache and can't go to school【要点二，症状】．I think there are two reasons，the first one is they have too much homework every day，it takes them five or six hours to finish the homework【高分句型一，注意it takes some time to do sth．句型的使用】，they can't go to bed untill 12 o'clock at night．The other reason is their parents always compare their children with others．【要点三，主要原因】We should be confident and try to relax ourselves，and we should plan our time carefully so that we can have more time to rest【高分句型二，注意状语从句的使用】．【要点四，解决这个问题的办法】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．