Question

14．谈一谈你现在与两年前有什么不同，并根据提示语写一篇短文，要求字迹工整，词数60字左右．
提示词语：taller，more popular，more outgoing，be better at English，be a better student．I'm Paul，a Grade 9 student in No.1 Middle School．I'll graduate this summer．I've changed a lot during the last two years．
In the past，I was too shy to speak in front of others．I wasn't interested in study，so I was weak in all my subjects．What's more，I didn't like sports．Instead，I was crazy about computer games． However，I've changed greatly now．I'm willing to share things with others and I get along well with my classmates．I study so well that I'm a top student in our class now．I‘m better at English than before．Moreover，I take an active part in all kinds of school activities．I was more popular．Last term，I even won the prize in the school English Writing Competition．
During the coming summer holiday，I'll help my parents do some housework and do more reading to improve myself．I want to be a better students．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
In the past，I was too shy to speak in front of others．过去，我太害羞了不敢在他人面前说话．
too+adj+to do sth 太…而不能．
【高分句型二】
I study so well that I'm a top student in our class now．我学习如此好以至于现在我是班上最好的．
so…that，如此…以至于，that引导的结果状语从句．

解答 I'm Paul，a Grade 9 student in No.1 Middle School．I'll graduate this summer．I've changed a lot during the last two years．
      In the past，I was too shy to speak in front of others．【高分句型一】（性格内向，不敢在人前讲话）I wasn't interested in study，so I was weak in all my subjects（对学习不感兴趣，成绩不好）．What's more，I didn't like sports．Instead，I was crazy about computer games．（不爱运动，沉迷电脑游戏）（过去）
     However，I've changed greatly now．I'm willing to share things with others and I get along well with my classmates．（乐于分享，与同学相处很好）I study so well that I'm a top student in our class now．【高分句型二】I‘m better at English than before（各科成绩优异）Moreover，I take an active part in all kinds of school activities．I was more popular（积极参加各类活动）Last term，I even won the prize in the school English Writing Competition．（现在）
During the coming summer holiday，I'll help my parents do some housework and do more reading to improve myself．I want to be a better students（暑假计划）

点评 写作要抓住要点．要在"准"字上下功夫．在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面．在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子要进行默写，这样在写作时就能写出准确地道的作文．