Question

14．美国女孩Helen，最近在她的Blog上发布她的烦恼．请你（Yu Le）根据她的帖子，将她的烦恼和问题总结归类，与她交流看法，并给她一些建议，帮她排忧解难．文章开头已给出，不计入总次数．
要求：1．语句通顺，语法正确，内容完善． 2．字数不少于80．
My problem is my parents．They never stop going on about how I should study hard，keep my hair tidy and wear smart clothes．They even make me do the washing-up after dinner every night!None of my friends have got such parents．
I can't get on well with them．I am stressed out．What should I do？
Helen，USA

Dear Helen，
I know you feelingstressedout．But I think it's lucky for you to have such good parents．You should understand and respect them．They have richer experience and better advice for young people．As your parents，they surely hope you become an excellent person．Their demands are helpful for your growing up．
Every member should be responsible and do something for the family．So you should do what you can do，such as keep your room clean and do the washing-up．Remember：Learning by doing．
You should keep your hair tidy and wear smart clothes．Teenagers should look like teenagers．
Anyway，if you have any problems，just talk with your parents．
Yours，
YuLe．
Yours，
Yu Le．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 But I think it's lucky for you to have such good parents．但是我认为你有这样好的父母是幸运的．  这是一个宾语从句，I think是主句，后面的是宾语从句，it is+形容词+for sb．to do sth．句型，对于…来说…是幸运的．
 高分句型二
  Anyway，if you have any problems，just talk with your parents．无论如何，如果你有任何问题，只要和你的父母谈谈．这是if引导的条件状语从句，如果…．

解答 Dear Helen，
   I know you feeling stressed out【开头点明主题】．But I think it's lucky for you to have such good parents．【高分句型一，注意宾语从句的使用】You should understand and respect them．They have richer experience and better advice for young people．As your parents，they surely hope you become an excellent person．Their demands are helpful for your growing up．
     Every member should be responsible and do something for the family．So you should do what you can do，such as keep your room clean and do the washing-up．Remember：Learning by doing．
     You should keep your hair tidy and wear smart clothes．Teenagers should look like teenagers．【正文部分详细介绍自己的建议】
     Anyway，if you have any problems，just talk with your parents．【高分句型二，注意if引导的条件状语从句的使用】【结尾紧扣主题】
Yours，
Yu Le．

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