Question

书面表达。（10分）

近来,湖南卫视亲子互动节目<爸爸去哪儿>火爆荧屏,其中一个叫做Kimi的小男孩更是获得了万千观众的喜欢.请你依据下方表格内容,用英文写一篇小短文介绍他.

注意：要点完整，条理清楚，书写规范（字体工整，注意大小写和标点符号），40个词左右。

Name	Kimi
From	Taiwan
Age	5
Look	face-round eye-big mouth-wide hair-black
Clothes	T-shirt-white pants-blue

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Answer 1

The boy is Kimi. He is from Taiwan. Kimi is 5 years old. He has a round face and big eyes. His mouth is wide and his hair is black. Look, Kimi is in a white T-shirt and blue pants now. He is cool. Do you like him?

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇让小作者介绍Kimi的一些情况。小作者把要求写的几点都表述得很清晰。另外，写作时，小作者还注意了语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者把列举的要点都写了进去。这些内容也比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如He has a round face and big eyes. Look, Kimi is in a white T-shirt and blue pants now.

考点：提纲类作文。