Question

12．A．话题作文：近年来由于过分强调升学率，加之家长望子成龙心切，给学生带来很大压力，忽略了孩子们的身体健康．因此国家发起"开展阳光体育运动"的号召，以引起人们的重视，请以"运动"为话题写一篇短文．
提示：1．你最喜欢什么运动；
2．你在校内外所进行的运动及时间； 
3．运动的感受和意义．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I learned to swim when I was only 5 years old当我只有五岁的时候我学会了游泳．
when引导的时间状语从句．
【高分句型二】
Although I was a little nervous in the water at first，with the help of my parents and coach，I could swim well after several weeks虽然一开始在水里我有点紧张，但在我的父母和教练的帮助下，几个星期之后我能游的很好．
although引导的让步状语从句．不能与but连用．

解答 As we know，sport is an important part of our life．I am interested in sport and I do sports every day．
My favourite sport is swimming．（介绍你最喜欢的运动．）It is a healthy and popular sport．I learned to swim when I was only 5 years old．【高分句型一】Although I was a little nervous in the water at first，with the help of my parents and coach，I could swim well after several weeks【高分句型二】．Now，I am very good at swimming and I go swimming over three times a week．As far as I am concernned，swimming in the water is cool and exciting．During the summer holidays，I usually go swimming in the sea with my family and we always have a wonderful time．（如何进行体育运动）
I think doing sports is necessary．【高分句型一】Sports can help us relax and concentrate on our studies better．Sports can make us grow well．Sports can bring us friends．（运动带给你的益处和意义）

点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．