Question

书面表达（满分10分）

以“ My best friend “ 为题写一篇短文，包括以下要点：

1.他和我一样高，戴着一副小小的圆眼镜

2.爱好体育运动，每天花大量时间练习打篮球;

3当某事困扰我时，我总是去他那里请求帮助

4．他总能使我快乐，和他一起我不会感到厌烦;

5．他长大后想成为一名社会工作者。

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Answer 1

I have a best friend. Her name is Kate. In some ways we look the same and in some ways we look different. We have some things in common.

We both have black eyes and black hair, although my hair is longer than hers. We both like reading and listening to music.

She is taller and quieter than me. She is very careful. I’m a little more outgoing than her. I am also funnier than her.

But she is more beautiful than me. I think I’m smarter than her. My favorite subject is science, and her favorite subject is Chinese.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。结合所给材料，介绍我和我的朋友。根据内容可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My /Her name is……，be good at及do well in等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达自己的交友意愿。

【亮点说明】 这篇短文简明、扼要地阐明了“我”和好友的基本信息，并且并包含了图表中所列举的全部信息，全面地对两个人的不同特征进行了鲜明的对比。其中形容词的比较级的使用准确、代词运用恰当，介绍时条理清晰，有条不紊，是一篇不错的英语范文。

考点：提纲作文。