Question

书面表达。（15分）

假如李明是你的好朋友，根据提示写一篇80词左右的短文介绍李明的业余爱好。（短文开头已给出）

提示语：

1. 李明以前是个电影迷, 一周至少去看两次电影，有时租VCD在家里看，最喜欢的影星是姜文；

2. 李明现在的兴趣是集邮, 认为集邮非常有趣，可以从邮票上学到很多关于人物、地点、历史的知识, 有些旧邮票非常有价值；

3. 上周五是李明的生日, 他从朋友那里得到了许多邮票，非常高兴。

Li Ming is my good friend. He has many hobbies. He used to

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Answer 1

Li Ming is my good friend. He has many hobbies. He used to be a movie fan. He went to the movie theater at least twice a week. Sometimes he rented VCDs and watched them at home. His favorite movie star was Jiang Wen. Now Li Ming is interested in collecting stamps. He thinks it’s great fun. He can learn a lot about people, places, history and many other things from stamps. Some old stamps are very valuable. Last Friday was Li Ming’s birthday. He got many stamps from his friends. Li Ming was very happy.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇利用提纲的给材料作文。本文要写的材料比较具体，主要是介绍黎明的过去和现在，并介绍李明上周五过生日的事情。写作时要注意一般现在时和过去时态的转换。

【亮点说明】这篇短文时态应用正确，描述过去时能正确的使用used todo 的句型。描述现在的情况用一般现在时，描述上周的情况用一般过去时态。同时使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色.如: at least twice a week.，is interested in，学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。

考点：提纲作文。