Question

11．你的好朋友 Sally 是一名来自美国的中学生．在交流中，你了解到中美两国的课堂差别很
大．请你根据表格中的信息，描述各自的特点，并简单地谈谈你的观点．
In a Chinese class                                        In an American class
1．not call their teachers by their names      1．sit around the desks，face to face
2．listen to the teachers                              2．have quite relaxed rules
3．take notes                                             3．drink coffee or juice
4．put up their hands before speaking         4．speak out in class freely
5．be very serious                                     5．be very humorous
注意短文应包括表格中的信息和你自己的观点．
2．词数：不少于 70 词．文章中第一段和最后一给出的开头，不计入总词数．
Differences between a Chinese class and American class
There are differences between a Chinese class and an American class．Let's have a look at them．In China，students cannot call their teachers by their names，they listen to teachers and take notes But in American，students is allowed to call teachers'name，what is more，students and teachers sit around the desks face to face，they can drink coffee or juice and they are quite relaxed．Chinese class is very serious，if a student wants to speak，he should put up his hand while American class is very humours，students can speak out in class freely．
Different countries have different cultures．In my opinion，Americaeducation respect children's choice and they are open．InChina，Ru jia culture is traditional one，and Chinese respect teachers and pay attention to education．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
But in American，students ①are allowed to call teachers'name，②what is more，students and teachers sit around the desks③face to face，they can drink coffee or juice and they are quite relaxed．但在美国，学生可以叫老师的名字，学生和老师们面对面地坐在桌子旁边，他们可以喝饮料或果汁，很放松．
①be allowed to do sth被允许去做某事．
②what is more再者
③face to face面对面
【高分句型二】
Chinese class is very serious，①if a student wants to speak，he should put up his hand ②while American class is very humours，students can speak out in class freely．中国课堂很严肃，如果学生要发言，需要举手．在美国，课堂很幽默，学生可以自由发言．
①if引导的条件状语从句，主句含有情态动词should，从句用一般现在时．
②while然而，表转折．

解答 Differences between a Chinese class and American class
There are differences between a Chinese class and an American class．Let's have a look at them．In China，students cannot call their teachers by their names，they listen to teachers and take notes． But in American，students are  allowed to call teachers'name，what is more，students and teachers sit around the desks face to face，they can drink coffee or juice and they are quite relaxed．【高分句型一】Chinese class is very serious，if a student wants to speak，he should put up his hand while American class is very humours，students can speak out in class freely．【高分句型二】（中美两国的课堂差别）
Different countries have different cultures．In my opinion，America education respect children's choice and they are open．In China，Ru jia culture is traditional one，and Chinese respect teachers and pay attention to education．（我的观点）

点评 适当发挥但不能脱离中心，还要符合字数要求，切忌多多益善．古人云"言多易失"，你写得越多，出错的几率就越大，所以不可画蛇添足，为了语言的连贯性，适当使用过渡词，如and、then、so、or、but等，可使文章锦上添花．