Question

7．假设你是某文杂志的"知心姐姐"（Agony Sister），Helen，请阅读下面的这封求助信，并根据信的内容写一封回信．要求：
1.80词左右；
2．文中不要出现作者本人的真实信息．
Dear Helen，Last Sunday，my classmates and I went to the park．I wanted to take some photos．My father was out at that time，so I took his camera without telling him．Unfortunately，the camera was out of my bag and dropped on the ground when I was climbing the hill．It didn't work at all．I put it back quietly after I returned home．And I haven't told him till now．when I face to my father，I feel terrible．What should I do？Yours，David

Dear David
First，I think you'd better tell your father immediately．It you tell him the truth，he'll be angry with you．But at least you'll prove how honest you are．Then I think you should offer to pay．But you shouldn't use your pocket money．Yes，a camera is expensive，maybe you can't afford it．If you offer to do some jobs around the house，he'll realize that you're truly sorry．Oh，remember to be careful next tune．
Best wishes，
Helen．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
First，①I think ②you'd better tell your father immediately．首先，我想你最好马上告诉你父亲．
①think后省略了连接词that，后引导一个宾语从句．
②had better do sth最好做某事
高分句型二：
①If you tell him the truth，he'll②be angry with you．你告诉他真相，他会生你的气的．
①if引导的条件状语从句，时态遵循主将从现．
②be angry with sb对某人生气

解答 One possible version：
Dear David，
First，I think you'd better tell your father immediately．【高分句型一】If you tell him the truth，he'll be angry with you．【高分句型二】But at least you'll prove how honest you are．Then I think you should offer to pay．But you shouldn't use your pocket money．Yes，a camera is expensive，maybe you can't afford it．If you offer to do some jobs around the house，he'll realize that you're truly sorry．Oh，remember to be careful next tune．【就照相机摔坏一事给David提出解决的建议】
Best wishes，
Helen

点评 这是一篇给材料作文．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥．根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，是提出建议，给出自己的观点的，注意说话的语气及主谓一致问题．写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．