Question

6．作为一名中学生，要理解父母的辛苦劳作，要力所能及地帮助父母干一些家务活，以减轻父母的负担，请根据提示以"Help My Parents"为标题写一篇文章，提示包括：
1、我有一个幸福的家庭，爸爸妈妈工作很辛苦，所以我经常帮助父母干家务．
2、早晨起床后整理床铺、打扫房间、扫地．
3、早餐后刷碗，然后去上学．
4、下午放学回家后帮助妈妈做晚饭、打扫客厅、倒垃圾，之后完成学习任务．
5、周末洗衣服、叠衣服、帮助爸爸洗车、浇花．
6、参考词汇：help my parents，do chores，make the bed，sweep the floor，do the dishes，take out the trash，fold the clothes，clean the car，water the flowers
Help My Parents                                             

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 In the afternoon，when I get back home from school，I usually help my mom cook dinner．     下午，放学回家后，我经常帮妈妈做饭．这是when引导的时间状语从句，当…时候．
高分句型二
 My parents often say I am hard-working．  我父母常说我很勤劳．这是一个宾语从句，My parents often say 是主句，后面的是宾语从句．

解答 Help My Parents
    I have a happy family．My parents work very hard．They want to make more money for our family．As a student，I should study hard and help my parents．So I often do many chores to help my mom and dad．【开头点明主题】
    In the morning，I make the bed after I get up every day．Next I clean the room and sweep the floor．After breakfast I help my mom do the dishes．Then I go to school．In the afternoon，when I get back home from school，I usually help my mom cook dinner【高分句型一，注意时间状语从句的使用】．After dinner，I clean the living room and take out the trash．Then I do homework and watch TV．On weekends，I often do the laundry and fold the clothes for my family．Sometimes I help my father clean the car and water the flowers．【正文部分详细介绍自己怎么帮助父母做家务】
    My parents often say I am hard-working【高分句型二，注意宾语从句的使用】．I am glad to hear．【结尾紧扣主题】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．