Question

10．假设你叫Li Ming，请根据下面的提示词，发挥想象，向同学们介绍一下你房间物品的位置．
提示词：tidy  books  schoolbag  jacket  model plane．
This is my room．It's very clean and tidy!My jacket is on the bed．And my schoolbagison the desk．My modelplane is on the floor．Those are my pictures．They are on the wall．Where are my books？Look!They are in my bookcase．And on the desk are my computer and some CDs．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图片作文．本文要求按照题目要求结合图片中的内容完成这篇介绍房间摆设的作文．写作中要包含房间内物品的摆放位置、注意方位的描述等．根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称主要是第三人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题．写作中注意上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系．
高分句型：
①My jacket is on the bed．我的夹克在床上．句子中on the bed表示在床上，on表示在某某上面．
②It's very clean and tidy．它非常干净整洁．句子中clean and tidy表示干净整洁．

解答 This is my room．It's very clean and tidy（高分句型）!（引出话题）My jacket is on the bed（高分句型）．And my schoolbag is on the desk．My model plane is on the floor．Those are my pictures．They are on the wall．Where are my books？Look!They are in my bookcase．And on the desk are my computer and some CDs．（重点介绍房间物品的位置）

点评 这篇短文简明、扼要地介绍了房间的布局，并包含了文中所要求的基本信息．其中句式灵活、多变，介词短语的准确使用为文章增色不少．如on the bed，under the bed，Those are my pictures．，Where are my books？Look!，最为值得称道的是倒装句式的运用很到位，如And on the desk are my computer and some CDs．学习中再注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理．