Question

近年来，宁波市委市政府号召加快城市生态环境建设，努力营造天蓝水清地绿鸟语花香的“绿色宁波”。作为青少年，我们在保护环境和节约能源方面，可以做些什么呢？请你结合要点谈谈自己的看法，可以适当增加内容，字数80词左右。

 

 

 

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As a teenager, there are many things to do…

We’d better(我们最好)…

Don’t forget to…; Remember to …

In order to （为了）…

It’s necessary for us to …

Good environment is very important to everyone. It’s our duty to protect the environment.­­____

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

Good environment is very important to everyone. It's our duty to protect the environment. As a teenager, there are many things to do. We’d better walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. Don’t forget to turn off the lights or taps after we finish using them. In order to make our city more beautiful, we can plant more trees and flowers in the park or along the road. We should always pick up rubbish whenever we see it. And it’s very necessary for us to clean the parks on our day off. What’s more, we should stop using plastic shopping bags, we can use cloth bags instead. If everyone does something for the environment, I believe our city will be a better place.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍保护环境和节约能源方面，我们可以做的事。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：We’d better……；Don’t forget to……；In order to……；We should……；If everyone……；等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意使用提纲中所给的句型。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头保护环境的重要性，接下来介绍我们不应该做的事情，最后指出我们应该做的事情。此处用了ride a bike，turn off，pick up，What’s more等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。