Question

11．元旦就要来了，做一个假期旅行计划．
1你计划和父母亲乘飞机去北京旅行．
2北京是我们的首都也是一个美丽的城市．
3要去参观天安门、长城等很多名胜．
4要拍很多的照片．
5要买很多喜欢的东西．
请根据以上要点写一篇短文，注意不要逐字翻译，80字左右．
My vacation plan
The New Year is coming．Weplanto havea vacation trip．Myparentsand I plan totravel to Beijing by plane．Beijing is the capital ofChina．Itisalsoa beautiful city．We are going to visitthe TiananmenSquare，the Great Wall and many places of interest．Of course，we are going to take lots of photos．I want to buy a lot of thingsthat I like．I am going to buy some interesting things for my friends as gifts．I'm sure we will have a great time in Beijing．．

Answer 1

分析 根据题目提示，我们应该确定本文的主要时态是用一般将来时及一般现在时，人称应该主要用第一人称；注意描述的顺序；注意时态，人称和固定词组搭配，注意连词的运用．注意句子的顺畅，应符合英语的表达习惯．
①My parents and I plan to travel to Beijing by plane我父母和我计划乘飞机去北京．这里plan to do sth计划做某事，后面跟动词原形，by plane乘飞机．
②I want to buy a lot of things that I like．我想买很多我喜欢的东西．句子中want to do sth表示想做某事，that I like作定语修饰things．

解答 My vacation plan
The New Year is coming．We plan to have a vacation trip．（引出话题）My parents and I plan to travel to Beijing by plane（高分句型）（计划去北京旅行）．Beijing is the capital of China．It is also a beautiful city（简单介绍一下北京）．We are going to visit the Tiananmen Square，the Great Wall and many places of interest．（我们要参观的地方）Of course，we are going to take lots of photos．I want to buy a lot of things that I like．（高分句型）I am going to buy some interesting things for my friends as gifts．（拍照与购物）．I'm sure we will have a great time in Beijing．

点评 文中用了许多固定短语，如plan to do，places of interest，take lots of photos等．文章的句式也较丰富，两种一般将来时态结构be going to 与will使用恰当．文笔流畅，效果不错．