Question

11．生活像一只快乐的小船，承载着无数的欢声笑语．请以"A Happy Day"为题，写一篇短文．
要求：1．描述你经历过的一件快乐的事；2．包括事件发生的时间、天气、地点、具体经过，亦可适当发挥；
3.60-80个词．
A Happy Day
My uncle lives in the country．Last fall，there was an apple harvest on his farm．He invited my family to
taste the apples．On a sunny morning，my family drove to the farm．After we got there，I couldn't wait to pick
a big and red apple on the tree．The apple tasted so sweet．Then we picked apples．In the afternoon，we had a
big meal there．I thought it was delicious．I was very happy on that day!．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
there was an apple harvest on his farm．他的农场上苹果该收获了．这是一个there be句型，表示某地有某物．
高分句型二
I thought it was delicious．我觉得很好吃．这是一个宾语从句，主句是I thought，是一般过去时，从句是 it was delicious，注意从句的时态应该和主句一致．

解答 A Happy Day 
     My uncle lives in the country．Last fall，there was an apple harvest on his farm【高分句型一，注意there be句型的使用】．He invited my family to taste the apples【开头点明主题】．On a sunny morning，my family drove to the farm．After we got there，I couldn't wait to pick a big and red  apple on the tree．The apple tasted so sweet．Then we picked apples．In the afternoon，we had a big meal there．I thought it was delicious【高分句型二，注意宾语从句的使用】．【正文部分介绍这一天的活动】I was very happy on that day!【结尾部分紧扣主题】

点评 动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题．注意不要遗漏要点，句子要通顺连贯，没有语法错误．