Question

16．假如你是Kitty，你想推荐你班同学Simon为本学期最佳学生奖得主，请根据下列要点写一封80词左右的推荐信，开头和结尾已给出，不计入字数：
1．各门功课学得很好．数学、语文、英语很突出．对中国历史了解很多．
2．喜爱体育，足球踢得很好，是校足球队的成员．
3．非常乐于助人，经常在车上给老人让座，为希望工程筹款．
4．有一天在回家路上救了一个落水儿童．
Dear Sir/Madam
I'd like to recommend Simon for this year's Best Student Award．He is good at all the subjects．He has
good grades in Maths，Chinese and English．He is also good at History．He learns a lot about Chinese History．He loves sports and is good atplaying football，he is on our school football team．He's helpful．He often gives his seat to the old on the bus．He also raises money for Project Hope．One day，on his way home，he saved a child from the river．We will be happy if he can have the award．
Yours faithfully
Kitty．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
He often gives his seat to the old on the bus．他经常在车上给老人让座，give…to把…给…．
 高分句型二
We will be happy if he can have the award．如果他能获奖，我们会很高兴．这是if引导的条件状语从句，主句是一般将来时，从句用的是一般现在时．

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
     I'd like to recommend Simon for this year's Best Student Award．He is good at all the subjects．He has good grades in Maths，Chinese and English．He is also good at History．He learns a lot about Chinese History．【要点一，各门功课学得很好．数学、语文、英语很突出．对中国历史了解很多】He loves sports and  is good at playing football，he is on our school football team．【要点二，喜爱体育，足球踢得很好，是校足球队的成员】He's helpful．He often gives his seat to the old on the bus【高分句型一，注意固定词组使用】．He also raises money for Project Hope【要点三，非常乐于助人，经常在车上给老人让座，为希望工程筹款．】．One day，on his way home，he saved a child from the river．We will be happy if he can have the award【高分句型二，注意if引导的条件状语从句的使用】．【要点四，有一天在回家路上救了一个落水儿童】
                                                                                                                       Yours faithfully 
                                                                                                                                   Kitty

点评 动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题．注意不要遗漏要点，句子要通顺连贯，没有语法错误．