Question

8．如今，互联网在我们的生活中起着越来越重要的作用，人们的工作和学习几乎离不开互联网．有了互联网，人们的生活变得更加丰富多彩．请根据提示，以On the Internet 为题，写一篇介绍互联网用途的文章．
要求：1.80词左右．
2．包含信息、通讯、学习、娱乐、生活等方面．适当发挥．
3．当然，互联网也存在弊端，写出其不足，至少两点．

On the Internet
Nowadays，Internet plays an important role in our lives．On the Internet，we
can read news and learn about information．We can also send emails，take classes，read books and learn foreign languages，enjoy music，play games and so on．We can even do shopping and make friends on it．
But every coin has two sides．Internet also has several disadvantages．Children
spend so much time on online games that they may find they have less interest in the study．It's also bad for their eyes and health．
Let's use the Internet properly and it will make our life richer and more
colorful．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Children spend so much time on online games that they may find they have less interest in the study孩子们花了太多的时间在网络游戏上以至于他们发现对学习的兴趣更少了．
so…that从句：如此…以至于
【高分句型二】
It's also bad for their eyes and health对他们的眼睛和健康也有害．
be bad for：对…有害

解答 On the Internet
Nowadays，Internet plays an important role in our lives．On the Internet，we can read news and learn about information．We can also send emails，take classes，read books and learn foreign languages，enjoy music，play games and so on．We can even do shopping and make friends on it．（优点）
But every coin has two sides．Internet also has several disadvantages．Children spend so much time on online games that they may find they have less interest in the study．【高分句型一】It's also bad for their eyes and health．【高分句型二】（弊端）
Let's use the Internet properly and it will make our life richer and more colorful．

点评 写作要抓住要点．要在"准"字上下功夫．在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面．在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子要进行默写，这样在写作时就能写出准确地道的作文．