Question

18．我和我弟弟在同一个房间里．我们的房间很整洁．电脑在书桌上．书籍在书橱里．钢笔和橡皮在铅笔盒里．我的钥匙在书包里．我有一个足球．它在床下面．我的弟弟没有足球，但他有一个篮球．它在椅子下面．我们喜欢我们的房间．
    结合上面短文，写一篇英文短文介绍你的房间，字数在60-80．可适当发挥．
My Room
My brother and I are in the same room．My brother and I are in the same room．There are many things in it．The room is clean and tidy．The computer is on the desk．The books are in the bookcase．A pen and an eraser arein the pencil box．My keys are in my bag．I have a football．It is under the bed．My younger brother doesn't have football，but he has a basketball andit is under the chair．We love our room．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
There are many things in it．  里面有很多东西．这是There be 句型，表示某地有某物．
高分句型二
The computer is on the desk．电脑在桌子上．  on the desk  是介词词组，放在be动词的后面作表语．

解答 My Room
My brother and I are in the same room【开头点明主题】．There are many things in it．【高分句型一，注意there be 句型的使用】The room is clean and tidy．The computer is on the desk【高分句型二，注意介词词组的使用】．The books are in the bookcase．A pen and an eraser are in the pencil box．My keys are in my bag．I have a football．It is under the bed．My younger brother doesn't have football，but he has a basketball and it is under the chair．【正文部分详细介绍房间】We love our room．【结尾紧扣主题】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．