Question

8．假如你是某校九年级（1）班的学生，你校正在举行"Young Star Award"的评选活动，请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的同学李明，以供参评．内容要点如下：
1．个子高，性格外向，为人友善；
2．学习认真，成绩优秀；
3．爱好广泛，擅长踢足球；
4．乐于助人，…；
5．得到高度赞扬，我们以他为荣．
写作要求：
1．短文必须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2．第4要点的省略号部分，需作适当发挥（2-3句话即可）；
3．词数在90个左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数．
I'm glad to hear the news that"Young Star Award"is going on in our school．I think Li Ming is the hot favorite for the award．                                        

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
That's why he has a lot of friends那是为什么他有很多的朋友的原因．
why引导的表语从句，和is构成系表结构．
【高分句型二】
He sets a good example to us all and we are proud of him他给我们做了好榜样我们感到自豪．
set a good example树立了好榜样．
be proud of…以…为自豪

解答 I'm glad to hear the news that"Young Star Award"is going on in our school．I think Li Ming is the hot favorite for the award．
Li Ming is a tall boy of wide interests，especially good at playing football．He is outgoing and always friendly to others．That's why he has a lot of friends【高分句型一】（个子高，性格外向，为人友善；）．Li Ming studies hard and of course is one of the top students at school（学习认真，成绩优秀；）．Besides，he takes an active part in different kinds of activities．He is good at soccer ball．（爱好广泛，擅长踢足球）
Li Ming is helpful．He always gives his seat to someone on the bus．（乐于助人）
His actions have won high praise from our school．He sets a good example to us all and we are proud of him．（得到高度赞扬，我们以他为荣）【高分句型二】

点评 写作要抓住要点．要在"准"字上下功夫．在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面．在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子要进行默写，这样在写作时就能写出准确地道的作文．