Question

10．三年的初中学习生活即将结束，你的父母亲一路艰辛，在学习和生活上给予你关怀、鼓励、支持与帮助，你心存感激．假如你的名字叫谢恩，请你给你的父母亲写一封感谢信，谈谈你对他们的印象，回忆他们是怎么帮助你的，并表达你对他们的祝福．
提示词：kind，help，encourage，thanks，hope．
注意：1．格式要完整、正确；词数：60～80；书写日期不限．
2．考生可以根据情节需要适当发挥；文中不得出现真实姓名和地名．
June 26
Dear father and mother，
I'm glad to write to you．
You are such kindand responsible parents that Ilove you very much．Owing to your help，Ifinished my primary study three years ago，now Iwill finish my junior middle school．I remember when Iwas Iprimary schoo，I hated going to school，and Ieven made much trouble at school．When you noticed this，you had a talk with me．You told me again and again the importance of the study and encouraged me never give up．I've made great progress in my study step by step and now I'm the top student in junior three
I wantto say thanks．I will work harder and be a useful person in the future．I hope you can be happy and healthy forever．
Yours，
Xie En．

Answer 1

分析 本文为初中毕业感谢信，写作要点为：1，谈谈你对他们的印象，；2，回忆他们是怎么帮助你的；3，表达你对他们的祝福．，

解答 June 26
Dear father and mother，
I'm glad to write to you．
You are such kind and responsible parents that I love you very much．Owing to your help，I finished my primary study three years ago，now I will finish my junior middle school．I remember when I was I primary schoo，I hated going to school，and I even made much trouble at school．When you noticed this，you had a talk with me．You told me again and again the importance of the study and encouraged me never give up．I've made great progress in my study step by step and now I'm the top student in junior three
I want to say thanks．I will work harder and be a useful person in the future．I hope you can be happy and healthy forever．
Yours，
Xie En

点评 考生需明确写作意图及写作要点，读懂题意，构思写作结构．