Question

【题目】书面表达：请以“my ideal school’’ 为题，根据以下要点写一篇短文。

要求：1.语言准确得当，条理清晰；2.必须包含以上所有要点；3.词数：80左右。

要点：

1. 一所混合学校；每天早上八点半开始上课，不需早起；下午三点半放学，有时间进行课外活动；

2. 选科目学，我希望上电脑课和体育课，喜欢电脑体育；

3. 和以前比作业更少、进行业余爱好的时间更多；每个月进行一次学校郊游；……

My ideal school

Let me tell you something about my ideal school! ___________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Let me tell you about my ideal school! It is a mixed school. Every morning I don’t need to get up early because we have lessons at 8：30. In the afternoon, school is over at 3 :30, then we can do a lot of after-school activities. At school, we can choose subjects to learn. I hope we can have computer lessons and PE lessons every day because I like computer and sports. We have less homework and have more time for our hobbies than before. Every month, we also go on a school trip. We always have fun. This is my ideal school. I love it very much. What about you?

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我理想的学校。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Let me...；Every morning I don’t need to ...；I hope we can...；This is...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我理想的学校是一所混合学校，接下来介绍学校的作息时间，所学科目，作业以及活动，最后介绍自己喜欢这所理想的学校。此处tell sb about sth, need to do sth, get up, every day, go on a school trip, have fun，what about等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。