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　　Anna收到Eve的来信。请根据信的内容帮助Anna给Eve写一封回信。(不少于60字)

Dear Anna,

　　I have a problem, and I need your help．I have a twin sister, Kate, and we are getting on well．But she likes music．She always plays her CDs too loud when I am doing homework．Also, she always borrows my things and doesn't return them．Last Sunday, she borrowed my English book and hasn't returned it to me yet．I argued with her yesterday．

　　What should I do? Could you please give me some advice?

Yours,

Eve

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各档次的给分范围和要求： 　　第四档(很好)：(9－10分)完全完成了试题规定的要求，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，没有语法和词汇错误，具备较强的语言运用能力，完全达到了预期的写作目的。 　　第三档(好)：(5－8分)完成了试题规定的要求，应用的语法结构和词汇能满足题目的要求，基本没有语法和词汇错误，达到了预期的写作目的。 　　第二档(一般)：(3－4分)未恰当完成试题规定的要求，未描述清楚，写了一些无关内容，有语法和词汇错误，影响了对写作内容的理解，信息未能清楚地传达给读者。 　　第一档(差)：(1－2分)未完成试题规定的要求，写了一些无关内容，语法结构单调，词汇项目有限，有较多语法和词汇错误，影响对写作内容的理解，信息未能传达给读者。 　　(0分)未能传达给读者任何信息：内容极少，无法评判，写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。 　　范文： Dear Eve： 　　Don't worry．There are a lot of things you could do．First, you could have a talk with her．Tell her that you don't like doing homework with the music on．If she doesn't like to turn off the music, then you could ask her to turn down the music．And second, don't lend your things to your cousin next time．And maybe you could ask her parents for help．If she lost her book, ask her parents to buy one for her．I hope you will be happy again． Yours, Anna