Question

1．假如你是李华，从美国留学回国，发现中国人民的生活发生了惊人的变化．根据以下信息写封信给你的美国朋友Mike．
1．以前人们出门必须带现金，现在大家打车用手机，吃饭结账也用手机．说明变化的原因．
2．以前人们买东西都去实体店，现在几乎所有东西都可以网购．说明变化的原因．
3．你对这些变化的感受．
字数：120词左右
参考词汇：实体店 brick-and-mortar store      打车hail a car
Dear Mike，
I am back in China now，and the changes in people's life here are striking．
In the past，people had to take some cash when going out，but now we can use our cellphones to hailacar and pay for our meals．（高分句型一）I think the development of smartphones，which is increasingly fast，is the main cause of the change．（高分句型二）
Another difference is that in the past，people would go to brick-and-mortar stores to buy what they wanted，while people can buy almost everything online now．（高分句型三）The development of the Internet and the growth of delivery service combined make online purchase possible．
From my point of view，we are lucky to live in the information age．After all，there are only a few clicks of my mouse between me and a product from America．I hope you can come to China to see the changes in person．
Best wishes，
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假如你是李华，从美国留学回国，发现中国人民的生活发生了惊人的变化．根据以下信息写封信给你的美国朋友Mike，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：以前人们出门必须带现金，现在大家打车用手机，吃饭结账也用手机．说明变化的原因．以前人们买东西都去实体店，现在几乎所有东西都可以网购．说明变化的原因．你对这些变化的感受．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：pay for 支付；The development of …的发展；the growth of delivery service 快递服务的发展；From my point of view从我的观点的角度；After all毕竟；in person亲自；
In the past，people had to take some cash when going out，but now we can use our cellphones to hail a car and pay for our meals．（高分句型一）
I think the development of smartphones，which is increasingly fast，is the main cause of the change．（高分句型二）
Another difference is that in the past，people would go to brick-and-mortar stores to buy what they wanted，while people can buy almost everything online now．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mike，
      I am back in China now，and the changes in people's life here are striking．
      In the past，people had to take some cash when going out，but now we can use our cellphones to hail a car and pay for our meals．（高分句型一）I think the development of smartphones，which is increasingly fast，is the main cause of the change．（高分句型二）
      Another difference is that in the past，people would go to brick-and-mortar stores to buy what they wanted，while people can buy almost everything online now．（高分句型三）The development of the Internet and the growth of delivery service combined make online purchase possible．
       From my point of view，we are lucky to live in the information age．After all，there are only a few clicks of my mouse between me and a product from America．I hope you can come to China to see the changes in person．
       Best wishes，
                                                                                                                 Yours，
                                                                                                                 Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．