Question

最近，你们班召开了以“我的中国梦”为主题的班会活动。请写一篇日记，记述班会情况及自己的感受。
内容要点如下：　　1.每位同学都畅谈了自己对中国梦的理解；　　
2.你谈到了自己的梦想；　　
3.如何实现自己的梦想。　　
注意：　　1. 总词数120左右。　　　　　
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Answer 1

May 8           Wednesday           Sunny
Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Inspired by President Xi’s Chinese Dream, everyone talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that this dream will come true in the future.
I also talked about my own dream. I have always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s lives but also they are doing a respectable job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledge.
To realize my dream, I must try to work hard from now on. I must learn as much as I can so that I can get into a good medical college, where I can prepare myself adequately for the job of a doctor. Only in this way can I accomplish my goal.

试题分析：题目要求写一篇日记，陈述班会情况和自己的感受。使用第一人称进行作文，时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，多使用定语从句、倒装、状语从句等语法知识。
亮点说明：范文使用了较多的重点语法知识：非谓语动词Inspired by President Xi’s Chinese Dream, To realize my dream；宾语从句believe that this dream will come true in the future.；倒装Not only can doctors save people’s lives，Only in this way can I accomplish my goal.；目的状语从句so that I can get into a good medical college；非限制性定语从句where I can prepare myself adequately for the job等，重点语法知识的使用，给作文增色很多；
范文还使用了一些固定短语和固定搭配：talked about；not only...but also；live a better life；try to；from now on；
as much as I can等，使作文内容显得比较充实。