Question

假定你是李明，你的澳大利亚朋友Steven给你来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点给他回信提出建议。
要点：
参加中文学习班；看中文书刊电视；学唱中文歌曲；交中国朋友。
注意：
文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
词数：120左右。
Dear Steven,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
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Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear Steven,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
Here are my suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you will be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
Try and write to me in Chinese next time.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，但不是很具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。还要考生自己拓展发挥，在写作的过程中，要注意使用时态，人称，单词拼写，主谓一致等问题，也可以使用一些高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些句型： it is important to take a Chinese course, as you will be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. 这句话用了it做形式主语， it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. 这句话用了状语从句的省略，还有文章使用了First, Then, Besides这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。
考点: 考查提纲类书面表达