Question

10．假如你叫李华，你的美国网友Jim发来一封email，向你了解我国传统节日端午节的情况，请你根据中文提示写一封e-mail发给他．
节日日期：中国农历五月初五
节日由来：爱国诗人屈原救国不成--投江自尽---往江中投粽子（以免鱼损伤他的躯体）．
节日活动：家人团聚，观看龙船比赛，吃粽子，纪念先人．
注意：信的开头已给出．字数在100 左右
参考词汇：端午节The Dragon Boat Festival/Duanwu Festival；农历Lunar calendar；自杀commit suicide；汨罗江Miluo River
Dear Jim，
Thanks for your interest in my country's traditional festivals．And I'm delighted to introduce The Dragon Boat Festival to you．
                      

Answer 1

分析 考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心．注意文章文体、人称和时态．要求介绍．同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．写作中应该尽量使用高级词汇及高级句型，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理．
高级词汇及句型
   a respected patriotic poet；devotion to；Hopeless and angry；the true spirit of honesty and loyalty of our ancestors
    The festival was created in honor of a respected patriotic poet in ancient China，who had great devotion to the people but was unfairly treated by the unwise king of his country．（高级句型一）
    Hopeless and angry，he threw himself into the Milo River to prove his love to his motherland．（高级句型二）
     By celebrating it，we follow the trace of the forefathers who handed down the virtues．（高级句型三）

解答 Dear Jim，
      Thanks for your interest in my country's traditional festivals．And I'm delighted to introduce The Dragon Boat Festival to you．Dragon Boat Festival falls on the fifth day of the fifth month of the Chinese Lunar Year．The festival was created in honor of a respected patriotic poet in ancient China，who had great devotion to the people but was unfairly treated by the unwise king of his country．（高级句型一） Hopeless and angry，he threw himself into the Milo River to prove his love to his motherland．（高级句型二）
      Nowadays，people in China observe this traditional holiday by holding dragon boat races and eating zong zi which is made of rice wrapped in bamboo leaves．
In my opinion，as a traditional Chinese festival，Dragon Boat Festival keeps us reminded of the true spirit of honesty and loyalty of our ancestors．By celebrating it，we follow the trace of the forefathers who handed down the virtues．（高级句型三）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．