Question

19．假如你是大学一年级新生李华．开学之初，你的英语老师Ms．Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议．请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信．
1、对英语学习的认识；
2、自己目前的英语水平；
3、自己英语学习存在的主要问题；
4、对英语教学的两点建议．
注意：
1、词数100左右；
2、信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Ms．Li，
I'm very happy to have you as our English teacher．
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Thank you!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇关于英语学习的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一对英语学习的认识；二自己目前的英语水平以及存在的主要问题；三对英语教学的两点建议．
高分句型：
1．Therefore，mastering English means we can see the world through a new window．句子里
mastering English 是动名词做主语，谓语动词用第三人称单数；we can see the world through a new window是宾语从句，省略了引导词that．
因此，掌握了英语意味着我们有了看世界的一个新的窗口．
2．My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart，and that I often feel nervous when speaking English．句子里that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart，和that I often feel nervous when speaking English是两个表语从句．
我的英语只是一般，主要的两个问题是，一我感到很难记住单词，二说英语时我经常感到紧张．

解答 Dear Ms Li，
      I'm very happy to have you as our English teacher．As the world is becoming a global village，English is getting more and more important．Therefore，mastering English means we can see the world through a new window．【高分句型一】（对英语学习的认识）
      My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart，and that I often feel nervous when speaking English．【高分句型二】（自己目前的英语水平以及存在的主要问题）I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words．Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking．I believe we can make much progress in English with your help．（对英语教学的两点建议）
        Thank you!
                                                                                                                                                                                                              Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
写作时，我们要根据情景判断短文需要的主体时态，即搞清楚要写的是什么时候的事，过去的就用过去时．比如日记，是叙述过去发生的事情，自然用过去时；通知多用将来时．