Question

19．假设你是新华中学高三学生李华，进入高三后你的朋友William感到压力很大，学习效果甚微，请你给他写一封电子邮件，帮助他放松身心，提高学习效率．
内容要点：
1．快乐学习，保持愉快的心情；
2．积极参加体育活动，听听歌曲音乐；
3．多与同学交流，互相鼓励．
注意：1．开头和结尾已经为你写好，词数100词左右．
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear William，
Recently，I have heard that you feel stressed as a student of Senior Three．
__________________________
                                                      Yours Sincerely，
                                                       Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料，给William写一封电子邮件，帮助他放松身心，提高学习效率．要点包括：1．快乐学习，保持愉快的心情；2．积极参加体育活动，听听歌曲音乐；3．多与同学交流，互相鼓励．．写作时人称以第一和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
重点词汇：First of all（首先）；remove（移动，去除）；keep up （保持，维持）；take part in （参加）；build up（树立，增强，积累）；provide sb with sth（为某人提供某物）；encourage sb to do sth（鼓励某人做某事）．
高分句型：1．Another way ①to keep up our spirits is ②to take part in sports．
                  ①不定式短语to keep up our spirits 作定语修饰主语Another way；②不定式短语to take part in sports在句中作表语．
                 2．①Not only does exercise build up the body，but also it provides us with time to relax and fresh our mind，②making us memorize things faster and longer．
                   ①Not only 位于句首，句子用倒装；②现在分词短语在句中作状语．
                  3．Through the communication，we can find support，which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study．
                   which引导非限制性定语从句，关系代词which指代前句提到的内容．

解答 书面表达
Dear William，
  Recently，I have heard that you feel stressed as a student of Senior Three． Here is some advice on how to study effectively．
  First of all，learn in a relaxing way．This will remove our pressure，making study an easy job．Another way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sports（高分句型一）．Not only does exercise build up the body，but also it provides us with time to relax and fresh our mind，making us memorize things faster and longer（高分句型二）．Music，too，is another effective means of refreshing and helping us concentrate better．
  Last but not least，we should exchange ideas with our classmates．Through the communication，we can find support，which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study（高分句型三）．Hope these can benefit you．
  Best wishes!
                                                  Yours Sincerely，
                                                         Li Hua

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意要点的提炼要全，关键短语和句型要写对，准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，还要注意人称和时态使用要正确．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．