Question

生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执,导致关系紧张。请你结合此事,并根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文, 向学校英文报“Happy Teens”专栏投稿。

简要描述事情的经过	打篮球、碰撞、争执,等等
分析发生冲突的原因	1. 遇事不够冷静
	2. ……
谈谈避免冲突的做法	(请考生根据自己的经历或感想,提出至少两种做法)

注意:
1.对所有要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2.词数120 左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Conflicts with others are common in everyday life.

Answer 1

Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.
To be honest, it was Su’s fault but Li was also to blame—they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.
To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others’place.
Don’t be self-centered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely.

试题分析：本题为提纲类作文,要求学生介绍事情经过、冲突原因以及避免冲突的做法。话题贴近时代，贴近生活，贴近学生，提示内容少，发挥空间大，考生有话可写，体现了新课标背景下的命题方向。在写作中,学生首先应该注意时态的变化。在叙述事情的经过以及冲突原因时应该使用过去时,在谈及避免冲突的做法时应该使用一般现在时。学生还应注意段落清晰,行文流畅。根据要点提示,作文最好分为三段,第一段介绍事情经过,第二段分析冲突原因,第三段谈论避免冲突的做法,提出建议。
【亮点说明】范文思路清晰，结构合理，内容涵盖了表格内的所有要点，有适当发挥，主题得到了升华。此外，文章句式多样，有状语从句（不定式/分词做状语）Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball.、主语从句（it做形式主语）It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society.、祈使句Don’t be self-centered and try to be considerate.等；衔接词的选用增强了文章的连贯与流畅度，如：“Then” , “As a matter of fact”，“ especially”等。