Question

美国已故大演说家、”成功学家鼻祖”罗曼·文森特·皮尔有一句名言：”Attitude Is Everything”。请你结合自己的亲身经历，谈谈拥有正确的人生态度的重要性,词数120左右。

Answer 1

As a saying goes, “Attitude is everything.” It means our attitude will decide whether we will succeed or not in the future. If we take a positive attitude and keep on trying , we will achieve our goals in the end.
I can’t agree more with this view. At one time I was not good at English, which made me very depressed. Then I realized that I had to do well in English to go to my favorite university. I talked with my teacher about my problem, who offered some valuable advice to me. With my teacher’s help, I improved my English gradually.
My story shows that if we have a good attitude and keep on trying, we will be able to overcome difficulty and move on. It is our attitude that plays a key role in our life.

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】范文主题明确，夹叙夹议，在语言上用了一些常见的短语：can’t agree more with不能再同意了，take a positive attitude采取积极的态度， With my teacher’s help 在老师的帮助下，句式上也是富有变化：As a saying goes, “Attitude is everything.” It means our attitude will decide whether we will succeed or not in the future. 这句话用了宾语从句， At one time I was not good at English, which made me very depressed.和I talked with my teacher about my problem, who offered some valuable advice to me., 这两句话用了定语从句， It is our attitude that plays a key role in our life.这句话用了强调句。