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I was pushed into writing the "Top ten problems teenagers face" after I attended a school program, where I had the opportunity to interact with many teenagers. Each conversation was only adding one more item to the list of problems.
About two thirds of girls in Grades Nine to Twelve "worry about their appearance." While there were no gender differences in worries about school, girls worry about getting along with parents and what to do when they are older. Girls are proven to worry more about personal problems, romantic relationships, being liked by other kids and being concerned about what kind of person they are. In fact, the only thing boys worry about more than girls is succeeding in their physical activities.
What parents need is to look at ways to help teens and take responsibility for what we are exposing our teens to right now. We cannot afford to ignore the parental duties of bringing them up well from the time they are little. Televisions, computers and other gadgets that they spend most of the time on cannot give them the nurturing that only parents can.
【写作内容】以约30词概括上文的主要内容。

Answer 1

When interacting with teenagers, the writer found teenagers, especially young girls, have different worries. The author suggests that parents should play their part in helping teens get away from worries.

试题分析：本文属于读写任务写作，给了一段材料：先要求以约30个词概括上文的主要内容，要求有很高的概括提炼的能力，要抓住文章的主题，动笔前，一定要认真阅读原文，并理解内容。对学生的概括能力要求很高，认真看清题目要求，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。
【亮点说明】范文很精确的归纳了原文，而且在短短的30个字中，包含了词组play their part in 在…方面起着作用，和get away from远离，以及橘子： When interacting with teenagers, the writer found teenagers, especially young girls, have different worries. 这句话用了省略句，The author suggests that parents should play their part in helping teens get away from worries.这句话用了虚拟语气。