Question

目前,学校存在少数学生考试作弊现象,某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生征文,标题是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations”.请根据下列提示用英语写一篇短文稿. 要点如下:
主要原因：考试偏多,偏难; 不用功,懒惰; 取悦父母,老师;
个人看法：作弊不对,违反校规; 要诚实努力学习;......（其他看法）
注意：1.包括所有要点,可适当发挥.  2.标题和开头已写好,不计入总词数
3.词数 100 左右   

Answer 1

My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations
It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school. As students, we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us.
On the other hand, some of us are lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons. So when taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.
In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools. We students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations. What’s more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations.

试题分析：本文属于提纲类作文，文章的要点都以表格的形式给了出来，提纲类作文的关键在于要点不能遗漏和省略，表达一定要全面，覆盖要覆盖的所有内容。要表达全面清楚。要注意谋篇布局，文章使用一般现在时为主，在翻译要点的时候，不要一定按照它的顺序，可以灵活表达。在选择词汇时要选择一些高级的词汇，；在句型的选择方面要运用多样化的句型如倒装句，强调句，省略句等丰富文章的表达，让文章更有层次，更有文采。
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些词组：On the other hand另一方面, instead of 代替，范文中的句式多变，运用不同的语法知识： It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school. 这句话用了主语从句，As students, we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us.这句话用了定语从句， So when taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.这句话用了省略句，    In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools.这句话用了it做形式主语，文章还使用了What’s more,这样的词使文章更加连贯。