Question

在智能手机日益普及的当下，我们已经跨入了移动时代。智能手机五花八门的功能影响着我们的生活、社交、学习、工作、消费、休闲等各个方面。请你就某一个方面谈谈智能手机带给你的影响以及你对这种影响的看法。
要求：根据以上内容写一篇120词左右的短文。
提示：智能手机：smartphone     微信：Wechat

Answer 1

Nowadays, it is not rare to see a man walk on the sidewalks, smartphone in hand, completely absorbed in the digital world. Just as what computers once achieved, smartphones are transforming our life in every possible way—how we socialize, entertain, and study.
I used to contact friends by phone or QQ. But now I have switched to Wechat, a popular app that allows people to communicate and to share feelings and daily occurrence with friends. I can also receive the latest news by subscribing to famous websites. It makes me feel so connected with the rest of the world.
I am truly grateful for the convenience, connection and comfort brought by this marvelous technology. But meanwhile I feel deeply anxious. To stay informed, I constantly update my Wechat, for which I am often distracted. Therefore, we should be cautious not to fall slaves to the smartphones.

试题分析：考查开放性作文。这篇作文给出了一个关于智能手机的话题，并没有什么提纲。要求考生我围绕智能手机带给你的影响以及你对这种影响的看法来写。这就要考生自由发挥，充实内容，要言之有物，不能干巴巴的几句话，对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。同时在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。
【亮点说明】范文用了一些常见短语：used to 过去常常，subscribe to 订阅，句型上更是变化多样：Nowadays, it is not rare to see a man walk on the sidewalks, smartphone in hand, completely absorbed in the digital world.这句话使用了it做形式主语和过去分词做状语， Just as what computers once achieved, smartphones are transforming our life in every possible way—how we socialize, entertain, and study.这句话用了宾语从句， I contact friends by phone or QQ. But now I have switched to Wechat, a popular app that allows people to communicate and to share feelings and daily occurrence with friends.这句话使用了定语从句， To stay informed, I constantly update my Wechat, for which I am often distracted. 这句话使用了不定式做目的状语和非限制性定语从句。