假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下画一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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3．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，
每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Time fly like an arrow．I'm already in Senior Grade 3before I realized it．It will be only a little more than eight months before I graduate middle school．At the present，I'm busy review my lessons in order to take the College Entrance Examination．I hope to go to Beijing University，that is one of the best university not only in China but also in the world．I'll try my best to turn your dream into reality．Most of my classmates are also studying very hardly to realize their dreams．I do believe everyone will be able to enter an university or college．

分析本文作者主要讲述了自己与同学们目前进入高三阶段的学习情况以及自己的愿望，同时还表达了作者对所有同学都能考上大学的信心．

解答 Time fly like an arrow．I'm already in Senior Grade 3
before I realized it．It will be only a little more than
eight months before I graduate∧middle school．At the
present，I'm busy review my lessons in order to take
the College Entrance Examination．I hope to go to
Beijing University，that is one of the best university
not only in China but also in the world．I'll try my best
to turn your dream into reality．Most of my classmates
are also studying very hardly to realize their dreams．I
do believe everyone will be able to enter an university or
college．
详解：
1．fly改为flies      考查时态及主谓一致    根据下文使用了一般现在时，可知作者描述的是现在的状况；由于主语Time是第三人称单数形式；故用flies．
2．realized改为realize    考查时态   此处描述的是作者现在的情况，应使用一般现在时；故用realize．
3．在graduate后加from    考查固定短语   graduate from 意为：从…毕业；故在graduate后加from．
4．去掉the   考查固定短语 at the present 意为：当前，目前；故去掉the．
5．review改为reviewing   考查固定结构    be busy doing sth：表示忙于做某事；故用reviewing．
6．that改为which    考查关系代词    本句为非限定性定语从句，先行词Beijing University在该从句中作主语，由于关系代词that不能用于非限定性定语从句；故用which．
7．university改为universties    考查名词的单复数  此处指的是：最好的大学（中的一所）；故用复数名词universties．
8．your改为my   考查句意理解以及人称代词的一致性   本句的意思是：我会尽我最大的努力把我的梦想变成现实；此处指的是：我的梦想；故用my．
9．hardly改为hard   考查副词    hardly：几乎不，表示否定的意思；hard：努力地；此处指的是：同学们也都在很努力地学习；故用hard．
10．an改为a/去掉an   考查不定冠词或名词    此处表示泛指一所大学，由于名词university的首字母的发音为辅音/ju：/；故用不定冠词a；由于此处表示泛指，故名词university之前也可以不加冠词；故答案为：将an改为a或去掉an．

点评短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题，主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力．错误类型一般有：缺词、多词和错词．常见的错误有：1 词法错误，主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．

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