Question

15．假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华．你校拟选拔一批优秀学生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语．你希望参加此活动．请根据以下提示，用英语给校评选组写一封申请信：
1．对此活动的认识（如对本人的…益处等）；
2．个人优势；　　　
3．你的计划．
注意：
1．词数100；
2．可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；
3．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：晨曦希望小学 Chenxi Hope Primary School

Dear Sir/Madam，
I am Li Hua from Class One，Senior Two．As far as I am concerned，I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors，which thus will result in substantial social benefits．【高分句型】（对活动的认识）
I think I am qualified for being the pupils'English coach，because I have good character，and I'm independent in life and proficient in English．That's why I apply for the position．I hope I can join the instructive activity．【高分句型】（个人优势）
My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening，speaking，reading and writing．What's more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language，creating a good learning environment．【高分句型】I hope you can offer the opportunity．（计划）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是书信类作文，根据所给要点内容给学校写一封申请信，申请用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语．属于提纲作文．时态为一般现在时．人称以第一人称为主．重要短语：As far as I am concerned （据我所知），result in （导致），be qualified for （有资格，合格），be independent （独立），instructive（有教育意义），stimulate interests in（激发…的兴趣）．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
      I am Li Hua from Class One，Senior Two．As far as I am concerned，I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors，which thus will result in substantial social benefits．【高分句型】（对活动的认识）
      I think I am qualified for being the pupils'English coach，because I have good character，and I'm independent in life and proficient in English．That's why I apply for the position．I hope I can join the instructive activity．【高分句型】（个人优势）
      My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening，speaking，reading and writing．What's more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language，creating a good learning environment．【高分句型】I hope you can offer the opportunity．（计划）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                               Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．