Question

13．你们班英语课学习到My New Teachers这个话题时，老师安排了一个学习任务：分组讨论好老师的标准．你们小组认为以下方面很重要，现请你用英语写成发言稿，代表小组向全班同学汇报．
1．具有渊博的知识．
2．有丰富的教学经验和好的教学方法．
3．热爱学生，尊重学生，相信学生，善于与学生沟通．
注意：
1．词数100左右；开头和结尾已经给出（但不计入总词数）；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．文章不得出现真实的人名与校名．
Good morning，everyone！Just now we had a discussion and set some standards for a good teacher．On one hand，he should have extensive knowledge，from whom we can learn a lot．On the other hand，he should have rich teaching experience and good teaching methods．Only with rich teaching experience and good teaching methods can we learn with great interest．Naturally，we can learn better and better．Last but not least，as a good teacher，he should have an affection for his students and show respect for his students．In addition，he should trust his students．What is more，he must be good at communicating with his students．
Thank you for your listening．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们写一篇发言稿，代表小组向全班同学汇报，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第三人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：好老师的标准：具有渊博的知识．有丰富的教学经验和好的教学方法．热爱学生，尊重学生，相信学生，善于与学生沟通．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为分组讨论好老师的标准．第二部分为好老师的标准．第三部分为结论．
重点短语与句型：
set some standards设立标准
on one hand 一方面
On the other hand另一方面
extensive knowledge渊博的知识
Last but not least最后但同样重要的是，
高分句型一：On one hand，he should have extensive knowledge，from whom we can learn a lot．此句用了介词加关系代词引导的定语从句
高分句型二：Only with rich teaching experience and good teaching methods can we learn with great interest．此句only+介词短语，主句部分倒装

解答 Good morning，everyone！Just now we had a discussion and set some standards for a good teacher．（分组讨论好老师的标准）    
    On one hand，he should have extensive knowledge，from whom we can learn a lot．（高分句型一）On the other hand，he should have rich teaching experience and good teaching methods．Only with rich teaching experience and good teaching methods can we learn with great interest（高分句型二）．Naturally，we can learn better and better．Last but not least，as  a good teacher，he should have an affection for his students and show respect for his students．In addition，he should trust his students．What is more，he must be good at communicating with his students．（好老师的标准）
     Thank you for your listening．（结论）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧