Question

　　某学校附近拟建一座化工厂。请你以该校学生的名义，写一篇短文，陈述反对建此化工厂的理由。短文中要包括以下几点：

　　（1）不仅你本人，大部分同学都反对建这个化工厂。

　　（2）尽管该厂可以为本市赚不少钱，但危害大于好处。

　　（3）严重污染饮用水，防范措施不充分。

　　（4）造成严重空气污染。

　　（5）侵占学生们游戏、玩耍的场所。

Answer 1

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解析：

One possible version： 　　We have heard that a chemical works is to be built near our school． Most students of our school, including me, are against the construction． Although the works will make a lot of money for our city, we do think it will do us more harm than good． The drinking water will be badly polluted so that it is far from safe enough to our health． On the other hand, the air over the city will be polluted, too． We will never be able to breathe fresh air． How can we live here any longer? Last but not the least, the site for the chemical works has been the only place where we students play games and have sports after school． Where would we go if it were occupied? 　　In a word, we are strongly against the building of the chemical works．

提示：

建议使用句型： make a lot of money, do think it will do more harm than good　　　 建议使用动词：　be against 建议使用过渡性词语： including me,　on hte other hand, in a word 写作技巧提示： 　　什么是"以有形或无形的三段式写作" 　　以有形或无形的三段式写作是指写任何文章, 都要有开头、展开(Body), 以及结尾。有形则指文章呈显明显的三段式, 而无形则指文章呈显一大段, 但细读则可感到三段。具体的讲就是： 文章开头段则开门见山, 比如讲明什么时间, 谁干了什么, 目的是什么; 文章展开段则是写作新概念的关键部分, 要用到较多的技巧和手段; 结尾段以抒发内心活动为特征。 　　以NMET2003的书面表达为例： 　Dear Bob, 　开头： [I'm so glad to learn that you're coming in September． I've found a place for you．] 展开(Body)： [It's a small flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen． In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair． The rent is 500 yuan per month． The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School． Bus No．11 can take you straight to the school． In fact, it's only one stop．] 结尾： [Do you think you'd like it? If not, I can try and find another place for you． Just let me know．] Yours, Li Hua