Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线(___)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Yesterday morning, I was surprising to hear that my best friend Allee has been hit by a car and was in hospital. The other day when he was going to cross a street, he was such careful that he didn’t go until he saw the traffic light to turn green. But hardly had he got to the middle of the street while he saw a car suddenly appear on his right-hand side and come directly towards them. It was too late for Allee to escape. He was hit by the car or was thrown a few meters away. He was sent to the nearest hospital immediately and had operation. When I went to see him, he was out of dangers but still looked pale. I sincere hope he will recover and return to normal as soon as possible

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 surprising→surprised

 has→had

 such→so

 to 去掉

 while→when

 them→→him

 or→and

 operation前加 an

 dangers→danger

 sincere→sincerely

【解析】

试题分析：短文是关于作者的朋友Allee出意外的事情。Allee一向小心，每次都要等绿灯才过马路，但是那天他在过马路时却被突然出现的车撞了，意外发生后他立刻被送到附近的医院。当作者去探望他的时候，他虽然脱离了危险但是面色仍然苍白。

 考查形容词用法。I was surprising to hear that…。surprising 意思是“令人惊讶的”，此处是说明主语“我”的情况，应该用surprised表示人感到惊讶的，所以把surprising改为surprised.。

 考查动词时态。I was surprising to hear that my best friend Allee has been hit by a car 。主句用过去时态，宾语从句应该也用过去时的某种形式，所以把现在完成时改为过去完成时，故把has改为had。

 考查副词辨析。he was such careful that he didn’t go… such 用来修饰名词，而careful是形容词，应该用so来修饰。所以把such改为so。

 考查非谓语用法。he saw the traffic light to turn green. See sb do sth “看见某人做某事”，see 后面应该用省去to 的不定式做宾补，所以把to 去掉。

 考查连词用法。But hardly had he got to the middle of the street while he saw a car …此处是固定句型 hardly…when 表示“一。。。就，”句意：他刚到路中央，这时看到一辆车开了过来，所以把while改为when。

 考查代词用法。he saw a car suddenly appear on his right-hand side and come directly towards them.从上文可知汽车是朝他冲过来，所以把them改为him。

 考查连词用法。He was hit by the car or was thrown a few meters away.“ He was hit by the car”和”was thrown a few meters away”，应该是顺承关系，所以把 or改为and。

 考查冠词用法。He was sent to the nearest hospital immediately and had operation .operation是可数名词，所以前面加冠词an。

 考查冠词用法。he was out of dangers 。out of danger 是固定短语“脱离危险”，在短语中 danger是抽象名词，所以把dangers改为danger。

 考查副词用法。I sincere hope he will recover 。此处sincere是修饰动词hope的，所以应该用副词形式。把sincere改为sincerely。

考点：考查短文改错。