Question

5．假设你李华，前几天你的同学Jack说了自己的烦恼．请你根据信件内容和建议要点给他写一封回信．
建议要点：1．调整心态，树立信心；   
                  2．按时休息，适当放松；
                  3．制定合理计划．
注    意：1．词数100左右（开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数）；
    2．可适当发挥，以使行文连贯．
Dear Li Hua
I'm writing to ask for your help．
The next examination is coming，but I feel more and more nervous and these days I can't fall asleep as usual．What should I do？
                                                       Yours，
                                                       Jack     
Dear Jack
I'm sorry to hear that you have difficulty in falling asleep for a long time．
                                                                                                                                                       
                                                            Yours，
                                                                    Lihua．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
As long as you are confident，you can do your best in the exams．
只要你有信心，你就能在考试中尽你最大的努力．
高分句型二：
Last but not least，you'd better make a reasonable study plan and stick to it．
最后但并非最不重要的是，你最好制定一个合理的学习计划并坚持下去．

解答 Dear Jack，
     I'm sorry to hear that you have difficulty in falling asleep for a long time．
     From your letter I know that it is stress that causes your problem．So I suggest you do as follows．First of all，you must adjust your attitude towards exams and believe in yourself．As long as you are confident，you can do your best in the exams（高分句型一）．Besides，you should have enough sleep every day．Meanwhile，don't forget to take part in some activities to relax．With a healthy body，I'm sure you will study more efficiently．Last but not least，you'd better make a reasonable study plan and stick to it（高分句型二）．In this way，you will have a sense of achievement and then avoid being stressed out all the time．
      I hope the suggestions will be of some help．Good luck!
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

点评 本书面表达为议论文，议论文是对某现象或观点进行点评．写作时，应注意按提出、分析、解决问题的逻辑顺序来安排文章结构，使用足够的论据来分层次论证自己的观点．