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3．假定你是李华，是一名高一学生．最近，你校广播站面向全体学生招募两名英语播音员．你很想尝试一下，请根据以下要点写一封自荐信：
1．对播音感兴趣，梦想成为一名播音员（announcer），受过专业训练；
2．擅长英语，去年获得英语竞赛一等奖；
3．希望被录取．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a student in Grade1I have read the notice that our school radio station needs two English announcers，so I'm writing to introduce myself．First of all，I am greatly interested in broadcasting．I have received some professional training in my spare time，hoping that I can work as an announcer in the future．（高分句型一）Now I would like to put what I have learned into practice and gain some experience． Besides，I am good at English，especially spoken English．I won first prize in the English Speech Competition last year．So I think I am highly qualified for the job．If （I am） admitted，I will try my best to serve the students．（高分句型二）I sincerely hope that you can give me a chance to work for the school radio station．（高分句型三）
I am looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假定你是李华，是一名高一学生．最近，你校广播站面向全体学生招募两名英语播音员．你很想尝试一下，请根据以下要点写一封自荐信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：对播音感兴趣，梦想成为一名播音员（announcer），受过专业训练；擅长英语，去年获得英语竞赛一等奖；希望被录取．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：First of all首先；put…into practice把…投入实践；Besides另外；be good at 擅长；look forward to盼望；
I have received some professional training in my spare time，hoping that I can work as an announcer in the future．（高分句型一）
If （I am） admitted，I will try my best to serve the students．（高分句型二）
I sincerely hope that you can give me a chance to work for the school radio station．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
       I am Li Hua．I am a student in Grade 1．I have read the notice that our school radio station needs two English announcers，so I'm writing to introduce myself．First of all，I am greatly interested in broadcasting．I have received some professional training in my spare time，hoping that I can work as an announcer in the future．（高分句型一）Now I would like to put what I have learned into practice and gain some experience． Besides，I am good at English，especially spoken English．I won first prize in the English Speech Competition last year．So I think I am highly qualified for the job．If （I am） admitted，I will try my best to serve the students．（高分句型二）I sincerely hope that you can give me a chance to work for the school radio station．（高分句型三）       I am looking forward to your early reply．
                                                                                                                          Yours，
                                                                                                                          Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．