Question

请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。
There is a crack in everything, and that is how the light gets in.(Leonard Cohen, a Canadian singer)
注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③内容必须结合生活中的一个事例；
④文中不得透露个人姓名和班级；
⑤词数为120左右。

Answer 1

I still remember the day when I was left alone at home .I carelessly broke the vase, which was much treasured by my father. When he came back ,I was so fearful that I didn't tell the truth. The cat was my excuse. My father said nothing, but I could read his distrust .The next morning, after a restless night, I admitted to my father that it was my fault. I saw relief in his eyes. He smiled to me. From then on, I never told lies. My honesty won me great trust from others, which benefited my growth a lot. The accident, or exactly the “crack” forced me to mind my behavior.
It is the" crack "that is reminding me all the time that I have a long way to go. With the light through the crack I can see the road ahead clearly.

解析试题分析：考查开放性短文阅读。话题是There is a crack in everything,没有什么事情是完美的。任何事物都有自己的瑕疵之处。关键在于我们该怎么理解。可以选取生活中发生的一件与此有关的实例来说明任何事物都有瑕疵，但是并不影响价值。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。
考点：考查开放性作文
点评：开放性作文只给出了一个话题，给考生自由发挥的余地很大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。