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10．我校英语社拟邀请一位国际知名人士到校举办讲座，现就受邀嘉宾向全校学生广泛征求意见，假设你是李华，请在三位备选嘉宾（one of the world's billionaires，an astronaut，a volunteer of WWF）中推荐一位并给英语社社长写一封信表达你的想法，内容应包括：
1、推荐该嘉宾的理由（至少两条）；
2、你期待的讲座内容（至少两条）．
注意：
1．词数不少于100 词；
2．无须写出推荐嘉宾姓名；
3．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
4．开头语已为你写好．
Dear Sir，
It is such exciting news that the English club is to invite a world renowned figure to give us a lecture．
               

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，我校英语社拟邀请一位国际知名人士到校举办讲座，现就受邀嘉宾向全校学生广泛征求意见，假设你是李华，请在三位备选嘉宾（one of the world's billionaires，an astronaut，a volunteer of WWF）中推荐一位并给英语社社长写一封信表达你的想法，内容应包括：1、推荐该嘉宾的理由（至少两条）；2、你期待的讲座内容（至少两条）．写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系．根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩．注意：1．词数不少于100 词； 2．无须写出推荐嘉宾姓名；3．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；4．开头语已为你写好．
【亮点说明】高级句式、高级词汇、短语的运用是这篇文章的一大亮点．It is such exciting news that the English club is to invite a world renowned figure to give us a lecture．句中运用结果状语从句；If I could recommend one，I would go for an experienced astronaut who has once set foot on another planet or lived and worked in a space station．If引导的虚拟语气和定语从句完美结合；Since childhood，nothing has made me more fascinated than the blinking stars in the sky．Since的使用，句子用现在完成时态；Staring into the deep universe，I'm always left puzzled by the unknown heavens现在分词作状语；As for the speech content，what I am most curious about is the potential of discovering unknown life forms on other planets．主语从句在句中体现．

解答 Dear Sir，
       It is such exciting news that the English club is to invite a world renowned figure to give us a lecture．If I could recommend one，I would go for an experienced astronaut who has once set foot on another planet or lived and worked in a space station．（高分句型一）
       Since childhood，nothing has made me more fascinated than the blinking stars in the sky．Staring into the deep universe，I'm always left puzzled by the unknown heavens and I expect no one else can better explain the mysteries of the outer space than an astronaut．（高分句型二）Besides，an astronaut's experience is bound to inspire creativity and passion for astronomy in us young generations．Thus，it would be a crime not to follow an astronaut's lecture if we had a chance．
       As for the speech content，what I am most curious about is the potential of discovering unknown life forms on other planets．（高分句型三） The question of how astronauts carry out their daily routines in weak gravity appeals to me as well．
       I would appreciate your kind consideration of my requests．Looking forward to the lecture actually taking place．
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours respectfully，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．