Question

3．某中学生英语报正在举办主题为"One Choice That I Will Never Regret"的征文活动．请你结合自身经历，用英语写一篇短文投稿．要点如下：
（1）描述事情的经过；
（2）简要说明你从中得到的启示．
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）请注意内容需充实，行文需连贯、流畅．
Everyone has to make choices in his life．I had one that I will never regret．（高分句型一）
When I entered Senior High School，I wanted to join the school basketball team，but my parents didn't agree，saying it would get in the way of my studies．（高分句型二）So I tried to persuade them and promised I'd make a balance between them．Finally they agreed．Later，I did what I had promised and became captain of the team and also top of my class in studies．（高分句型三）
I learned from this experience that once you have made a choice，stick to it and work hard at it，then you'll never regret it．（高分句型四）．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息某中学生英语报正在举办主题为"One Choice That I Will Never Regret"的征文活动．请你结合自身经历，用英语写一篇短文投稿，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：（1）描述事情的经过；（2）简要说明你从中得到的启示．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般过去时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：make choices做选择；make a balance作出平衡；Finally最后；stick to坚持；
I had one that I will never regret．（高分句型一）
When I entered Senior High School，I wanted to join the school basketball team，but my parents didn't agree，saying it would get in the way of my studies．（高分句型二）
Later，I did what I had promised and became captain of the team and also top of my class in studies．（高分句型三）
  I learned from this experience that once you have made a choice，stick to it and work hard at it，then you'll never regret it．（高分句型四）

解答 Everyone has to make choices in his life．I had one that I will never regret．（高分句型一）
      When I entered Senior High School，I wanted to join the school basketball team，but my parents didn't agree，saying it would get in the way of my studies．（高分句型二）So I tried to persuade them and promised I'd make a balance between them．Finally they agreed．Later，I did what I had promised and became captain of the team and also top of my class in studies．（高分句型三）
      I learned from this experience that once you have made a choice，stick to it and work hard at it，then you'll never regret it．（高分句型四）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．