Question

15．最近你班就高三学生是否应该组织集体春游进行了讨论．以下是讨论的情况．请你用英语写一篇短文，反映讨论结果并谈谈自己的看法，然后发表在你校英语论坛上．赞成（62%）的理由反对（38%）的理由1．亲近大自然，拓宽视野；2．增强沟通、合作能力；3．结交新朋友．1．占用宝贵的学习时间；
安全很难保证．
注意：词数120左右（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）．
参考词汇：春游spring outing    视野horizon
Recently，our class has had a discussion about whether Senior Three students should go on a group spring outing．
                                                  

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇关于是否应该组织集体春游话题的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一点明话题；二赞成和反对的理由；三自己的看法．
高分句型：
1．In their opinion，going on a group spring outing can not only enable them to get close to nature and broaden their horizons，but also help improve communication and cooperation skills．句子里going on a group spring outing 是动名词做主语；not only…but also 连接并列的主语，表示"不但…而且"．
以他们看来，集体春游不仅能够让他们贴近大自然，开拓眼界，而且有助于提高交流和合作能力．
2．As for me，we can benefit a lot from the activity only if safety measures are adopted properly．句子里benefit  from 表示"从…获益"；only if 引导条件状语从句，表示"只要"．
依我看来，只要采取合理的安全措施，我们就能从活动中获益良多．

解答 Recently，our class has had a discussion about whether Senior Three students should go on a group spring outing．They take different attitudes towards it．（点明话题）
       62% of the students say yes．In their opinion，going on a group spring outing can not only enable them to get close to nature and broaden their horizons，but also help improve communication and cooperation skills．【高分句型一】Furthermore，it gives more opportunities to make new friends．However，38% of the students hold the opposite opinion．They think that they are supposed to concentrate their energies on studying，because the university entrance examinations are around the corner．The outing is a waste of time．Meanwhile，they can't prepare for every emergency．（赞成和反对的理由）
        As for me，we can benefit a lot from the activity only if safety measures are adopted properly．【高分句型二】On the whole，I am in favour of the former．（自己的看法）

点评 考查提纲类作文．
在确定了主题，人称，时态以后，我们要根据要点选词组句，然后按照篇章结构连句成篇．在这一过程中要注意选择恰当的表示并列、递进、因果或转折意义的过渡词，把所有要点、句子连接起来，使句与句意思连贯，结构衔接，力求准确生动、条理清楚．