Question

12．假定你是高中学生李华，你的美国朋友Jim即将升入中国的一所高中学习，想让你给他一些学习建议．请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．与老师交流，征求老师意见；
2．上课积极参与讨论，专心听讲，做好笔记；
3．课后积极完成作业，巩固知识．
注意：1．词数100左右；   2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Jim，
I'm delighted to hear that you'll be a senior student．Now，I'd like to share my study tips with you．
First，you'd better communicate with your teachers regularly．In this way，they may offer some great advice on both your study and life．（高分句型一） Second，why not involve yourself in each class actively，listen to the teacher attentively and take notes carefully so that you can review later？Third，it's a good idea to do your homework on time soon after school，which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind．（高分句型二）
I sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your new school life．（高分句型三）
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息给Jim一些学习建议．请你给他写一封电子邮件，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：与老师交流，征求老师意见；上课积极参与讨论，专心听讲，做好笔记；课后积极完成作业，巩固知识． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文是一篇电子邮件，采用三段式．语言简练，段落清晰，布局合理，运用高级句子．Having learned that you'll be a senior student，how delighted I am．现在分词的完成式做时间状语，同时使用感叹句；take notes carefully so that you can review later？使用目的状语从句；it's a good idea to do your homework on time soon after school，which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind．动词不定式做真正的主语，句中并运用非限制性定语从句和宾语从句；另外，First，Second，why not involve yourself in的运用为文章增色添彩．

解答 Dear Jim，
     I'm delighted to hear that you'll be a senior student．Now，I'd like to share my study tips with you．
     First，you'd better communicate with your teachers regularly．In this way，they may offer some great advice on both your study and life．（高分句型一） Second，why not involve yourself in each class actively，listen to the teacher attentively and take notes carefully so that you can review later？Third，it's a good idea to do your homework on time soon after school，which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind．（高分句型二）
     I sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your new school life．（高分句型三）
     Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．