Question

2．假定你是李华，打算5月份去伦敦旅行．请给你的伦敦（London）笔友Tom写一封信，请他届时到机场接你、帮你预定宾馆并推荐一些景点．
注意：1．词数100左右．
2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
3．开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总数．
Dear Tom，
    How are you？I'm writing to ask you for some help．
I've been dreaming of visiting beautiful Landon since Iwas a child．（高分句型一）I'm so excited that my dream will come true．Iwill have a one-week trip to London from May 1^st to May 7^th．Since you are familiar with London，I hope you can recommend some tourist attractions that are well worth seeing．（高分句型二）As this is the first time I have traveled abroad，could you possibly pick me up at the airport？I would be grateful if you could help me book a hotel room in advance．（高分句型三）I'm sure my trip would be an unforgettable experience with your kind help．
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li hua．

Answer 1

分析 根据提示本文可以分为三部分内容：
第一部分：表示一直想去伦敦旅行；
第二部分：向朋友寻求帮助，请朋友介绍旅游景点、帮忙购买机票、预定酒店房间等．
最后一部分表示：感谢朋友的帮助．
【相关语法点提示】
可以用到的表达：want to do sth．想要做某事；be ready to do sth．准备做某事；tourist attractions 旅游景点；book a hotel room预定酒店房间．
I've been dreaming of visiting beautiful Landon since I was a child．（高分句型一）
Since you are familiar with London，I hope you can recommend some tourist attractions that are well worth seeing．（高分句型二）
I would be grateful if you could help me book a hotel room in advance．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tom，
       How are you？I'm writing to ask you for some help．
       I've been dreaming of visiting beautiful Landon since I was a child．（高分句型一）I'm so excited that my dream will come true．I will have a one-week trip to London from May 1^st to May 7^th．Since you are familiar with London，I hope you can recommend some tourist attractions that are well worth seeing．（高分句型二）As this is the first time I have traveled abroad，could you possibly pick me up at the airport？I would be grateful if you could help me book a hotel room in advance．（高分句型三）I'm sure my trip would be an unforgettable experience with your kind help．
       Looking forward to your early reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                           Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                           Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．