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17．假如你是李华，近日你的英国网友Mary发邮件告诉你，为了参加学校广播站的面试她做了长时间准备，但面试失败，她现在心情沮丧．请你回复邮件安慰和鼓励她，并提出一些建议．
注意：1 字数100词左右．
2 可以适当增加细节，以使行文更连贯．
3 开头和结尾已给出．（不计入总词数）
Dear Mary，
I am sorry to hear that you are deeply depressed recently due to failing in the interview of the broadcast station in your school．（高分句型一）I can understand what you are feeling now．It is rather disappointing to fail in an important interview，which you devoted a long time to．（高分句型二）But one failure doesn't mean that you are not excellent．Actually，you are an intelligent girl．
You are supposed to have a positive attitude towards the failure，taking advantage of this chance to learn about some interview skills．（高分句型三）Besides，you'd better reflect on your mistake after the interview so that you will be more experienced than before．
I hope you will be happy again．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于开放类作文，根据提示信息你的英国网友Mary发邮件告诉你，为了参加学校广播站的面试她做了长时间准备，但面试失败，她现在心情沮丧．请你回复邮件安慰和鼓励她，并提出一些建议，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，2、要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：due to 由于；Actually事实上；are supposed to 应该；take advantage of 利用；Besides另外；
  I am sorry to hear that you are deeply depressed recently due to failing in the interview of the broadcast station in your school．（高分句型一）
  It is rather disappointing to fail in an important interview，which you devoted a long time to．（高分句型二）
You are supposed to have a positive attitude towards the failure，taking advantage of this chance to learn about some interview skills．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mary，
       I am sorry to hear that you are deeply depressed recently due to failing in the interview of the broadcast station in your school．（高分句型一）I can understand what you are feeling now．It is rather disappointing to fail in an important interview，which you devoted a long time to．（高分句型二）But one failure doesn't mean that you are not excellent．Actually，you are an intelligent girl．
      You are supposed to have a positive attitude towards the failure，taking advantage of this chance to learn about some interview skills．（高分句型三）Besides，you'd better reflect on your mistake after the interview so that you will be more experienced than before．
       I hope you will be happy again．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．