8.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(
)划掉.
第二节修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
I'd like to brief introduce the Hangzhou Public Bicycle Service to you.Our city insists on protect the environment,so we begin to use the Public Bicycle Service to reduce the traffic stress in 2008.There were 65thousand bicycle for people to use in daily life.In generally,more than 8 million people have to use them every year.
Some people think they are very useful and believe they will make us society more beautiful.Other think they are not convenience enough.As far as I am concerned,riding a bicycle such a good idea.We can take exercise in this way.Meanwhile,our environment can be protected.So,let's put the idea into an action!